The smell of smoke is all around me the oil refinery making fuel and the cars burning it. I hear one thousand car engines that sounds like a gang of loins roaring of food. I see smoke stacks towering over the mist as moves slowly forward and close to the smoke the apple factory.
I taste the chips that I'm eating in the car.
It's a good post but there are few mistakes that you can fix up later. You did use all of the senses which is a good thing and I'm glad that you described what the car sounds like. Overal I enjoyed this post.
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